Alone in the night,
descending the stairs,
I desolate happiness,
out of scars
The scars of past,
and present and future,
And the happiness of a wandering thought
In the broad daylight,
when I fade out
My shallow heart
confines desires…
A blurred vision,
and numb nerves
A wandering loafer soul
And a wandering thought…
I leap mountains,
and walk through the seas
Across the wind,
trimming the fire
I let myself breathe,
and calm down
I surrender my ego
To a wandering thought…
Nice poem!! i liked the similes 🙂
Thanks Shikha 🙂
If i submit to my wondering thoughts i disappear for hours.. 😀
Haha 😛 i guess that holds true for 90% of the “Homo Sapiens” species 😀
lovely…loved the last 2 lines…:-)
Cheers!
SUB
Thanks a lot buddy 🙂 i am glad you liked it!
It gave me a positive thrust! I loved it!
Thanks man 🙂
Wandering thoughts presented so beautifully, love the beginning of the poem.
Thanks a lot Saru 🙂
The pleasure of un-anchored thoughts. Soaring in the sky like a kite.
Beautiful composition.
Thanks a lot! Appreciation matters, especially when it comes from a writer like you 🙂
just beautiful 🙂
Thanks Shalini 🙂
Love this post! Wonderful Composition! 🙂
Thanks a lot Neeraja 🙂
wonderful feelings n thoughts…
last 2 lines are 2 good….
keep writing & smiling 🙂
Thanks a lot Sowmya 🙂 The last two lines are surely the standing prose of poem!
Glad you liked em!
Loved the positive feel of the poem, Excellent Piyush 🙂
Thanks Arti 🙂 optimism is the core theme of this prose!
Short and sweet
thanks mone 🙂