A flickering hope in despondency,
like a rebellious flare in the womb of a storm,
and the afflicting Déjà vu of failure,
pulling thy across the lines of anticipate…
The lightning strikes a chord,
with the strings of despair and anguish
while thou navigate the conscience
To the beats of an effervescent life…
The thoughts break autumn’s monotony,
to the resplendent light of springs
and the blossoms meet cacophony…
Just like a dewdrop kissing the earth,
the touch of whose makes the hoarse periphery,
a delight to walk on…
Just like the sun oozing out of his siesta
from the deep blue sea…
The insight outshines thy desire,
and thou command an enigma of sanguinity…
The naked half-moon exposing
its shining bare skin,
across the bed sheet of clouds
and the stammering gloom of night…
The darkness makes the shine more affluent,
like happiness leaping amidst a masquerade of gloom…
A hope is more than
a few fluttered words
it is the fortitude of forbidden times,
and the reformation of finesse…
a hope is more than just “A Hope“
Awesome and flabbergasting….Poetry comes alive here!
Thanks Jennifer…i tried a different version of poetry here! Glad u liked it 🙂
Fantastic!!
“The lightning strikes a chord,
with the strings of despair and anguish
while thou navigate the conscience
To the beats of an effervescent life…”
what stark comparative projections!!
Thanks for your generous comment Wilmert 🙂
I soo liked it Piyush…I come across so much stuff bt few only reach d scale of perfection n dis one f those. Beautifully written, extremely meaningful and in my way ths one s JHAKKAS!…keep comin up wid such stuff!
That was quite a generous comment..thanks a lot 🙂 Looking forward to more reviews!
Very nicely written!
thanks Vanshik 🙂 a long time since you visited… do read the other posts too.. 🙂
A bouquet of words whose fragrance escaped me. I am hopeless when it comes to understanding the nuances of poetry.
and i am hopeless while writing em 😛 thanks for the feedback 🙂
A very positive poem! Loved the feel it has! Wonderfully penned down 🙂
Thanks Arti 🙂
Beautifully jotted down, loved going through it.
Thanks Bro 🙂
very deep
Thanks Sujatha 🙂