The colloquial era of distorted sights
The enigma of thoughts and prejudiced plights
Betraying silence with elevated subterfuge
The sun, the moon, the stars, and the sky
Panorama of an entity and a soliloquy 
The night that shines through,
The day withering alibis
The petals of nascent emotions
The wrecked laughs and the intellect cries
The hallucinations of cerebellum intensifies
The sodomized senses, the actuarial lenses
Calculate the mystery of plundering breath
The denial of existence
And the existence of departed
The annals of history take a frontier thy
When you feel death
Resurgence cramps in
Carrying away the cold and dry….
Very innovative.. and superbly crafted. the aura of death and life is excellent!
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Superb bro nevr thought yu wud be having such capabilities 17 years ago
really Mesmerizing…
Hey thanks Abhi.. i am really happy that u liked my poem dude. 🙂 do keep the reviews coming 😀
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Very nice comparisons..your poem speaks pretty well
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Thnx Mohit 🙂
Thnx Mohit 🙂
Hey thanks Abhi.. i am really happy that u liked my poem dude. 🙂 do keep the reviews coming 😀
Wow! stark comparisons and phenomenal differences between these two poems. But this one is too good,, i am a fan!!
i appreciate your comments sir!
thanxz 🙂
Whoa! i like that.. would like to read a couple of more..
“When you feel death
Resurgence cramps in
Carrying away the cold and dry…”
bet u don’t hve better words for this
Will sure come up with a couple of em..thnx for reading my blog
i appreciate your comments sir!
Will sure come up with a couple of em..thnx for reading my blog
Fantastic!
thanks..
Thnx again 🙂
thanks..
Creative, Innovative poem!!
i appreciate ur kind words!! 🙂
i appreciate ur kind words!! 🙂
BEAUTIFUL..that’s it.. Very well written!!
Thanx 🙂
Thanx 🙂
Well, very well depicts the topic. Right usage of words and excellent placement. But i think it shud have been more elaborated..Gr8 work anyways!!
I appreciate your feedback sir..would work on it..Thanx for visiting my blog
I appreciate your feedback sir..would work on it..Thanx for visiting my blog
Beautiful.. and really mesmerizing… very well scriptured
thanxz 🙂
Thnx… 🙂
Other one was good, but this one is AWESOME.. the stanzas and contrasts are superb…very well Mr. Poet 🙂
Thnx again 🙂
Yeah…..that’s the perfect blend! 🙂
Thnx… 🙂
awesomely fantabulous depiction of death….
Thnx fr d appreciation karthik!!
Beautifully orchestrated words of art 🙂
Thanks Sianna 🙂